Date: 2011-01-12 04:50 am (UTC)
This was lovely and lilting in your choice of language and them finding each other again in more mundane circumstances.

I especially liked this correlation:
But David kept looking at him like an interesting plant, and Evan suspected he looked at David like an unfinished painting, with a vague idea of what it would end up as, but no clear picture yet.
But I have to laugh at the off-duty (waaaaay off-duty) picture Evan presents, as I love a clean-shaven and tidy Major Lorne, but find Kavan's personal scruffiness (well, at least as evidenced by his appearance at several cons) ... um ... not so much to my liking.
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